NOTES FOR THE INTERNAL REVIEW: New York Movie (Edward Hopper, 1939) / Dan McNeil

  • The scene is set
  • Everything is nearly ready
  • The green walls fade to a much darker colour as the lights go down
  • She likes the film, but you consider it poor
  • You came [as you recall] because you’d said no to marriage
  • You sit side by side, but apart, space and time expanding between you
  • You are incompatible
  • Her hair is blondly beautiful, cascading onto broad shoulders
  • It’s a twister, it’s a twister! shouts Zeke
  • Surrounding you: round-backed red chairs that remind you of tombstones
  • In Russia, millions who survive Stalin will live for another two years before Barbarossa engulfs them
  • You tell her you’re leaving
  • She follows, her tears flowing languidly like the Ganges on a steamy summer evening
  • You both stand by vermillion drapes for several minutes
  • You’re not in this scene
  • Nothing is said
  • You leave
  • She remains for a duration of eternity

Dan McNeil is a writer and artist from the UK. His work has appeared in numerous places, including Alienist Manifesto, Antipodean SF, Bewildering Stories, Don’t Submit!, Fugitives & Futurists, Full House Literary, Hyper-Annotation #001, Interzone Digital, Misery Tourism, Plutonics Journal and Sein und Werden. This is his second story to appear in RIC Journal.
His website is dan-mcneil.com; he can also be found on Twitter / X as @TheMcVariations

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