- The scene is set
- Everything is nearly ready
- The green walls fade to a much darker colour as the lights go down
- She likes the film, but you consider it poor
- You came [as you recall] because you’d said no to marriage
- You sit side by side, but apart, space and time expanding between you
- You are incompatible
- Her hair is blondly beautiful, cascading onto broad shoulders
- It’s a twister, it’s a twister! shouts Zeke
- Surrounding you: round-backed red chairs that remind you of tombstones
- In Russia, millions who survive Stalin will live for another two years before Barbarossa engulfs them
- You tell her you’re leaving
- She follows, her tears flowing languidly like the Ganges on a steamy summer evening
- You both stand by vermillion drapes for several minutes
- You’re not in this scene
- Nothing is said
- You leave
- She remains for a duration of eternity
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Dan McNeil is a writer and artist from the UK. His work has appeared in numerous places, including Alienist Manifesto, Antipodean SF, Bewildering Stories, Don’t Submit!, Fugitives & Futurists, Full House Literary, Hyper-Annotation #001, Interzone Digital, Misery Tourism, Plutonics Journal and Sein und Werden. This is his second story to appear in RIC Journal.
His website is dan-mcneil.com; he can also be found on Twitter / X as @TheMcVariations



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