[Hook] [Inciting Incident] [Character Introduction] [Setting details] [Showing, not telling] [Character goal] feelingslotsoffeelingslikeloveandhateandyearninglotsofyearningdon’tforgetyea ningohohtheyearning
[Obstacles impede characters’ goals] [More characterization] [Scenes, action, interaction] [Dialogue] andsubtextdon’tforgetsubtextandthetensionunderpinningitalltherealmeaningheretherealstorybehindit
[The character grows, changes] [The setting reflects the change] [Action rising] [Epiphanic climax] onecontrollingmetaphortorulethemallliketheringofpowerwhichshouldalsobetetitleofthestory
[Falling action] [Resolution] [A lesson learned] [A life irrevocably changed] [A closing, powerful image] nowsubmitendlesslypushingthroughdejectionindifferencepushingpushingpusingrepeatrepeatrepeat

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Reza Jabrani writes coarse prose and crude poetry @coarseprose